Destiny Poem by Michael Peterson

Destiny

Rating: 4.8


Either Fate or choice
We seem to find each other.
Distance apart our souls connect.
A magnetic pull or in the hands of God
It seems to be an internal love.
A love many desire.
A spiritual connection
Of Beauty and Mind
Our souls blend as one
For you are the one my soul desires.
We'll always be together
Soul to Soul
Heart to Heart
You are My Heart & Soul

Tuesday, August 14, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 03 September 2017

Michael, if you edit this poem, it will be A + material! Not grammatically perfect. Did you mean fate in Line 1, or did you truly mean faith? Line 4 should read or the hands of God. Line 5 should read an internal love. Content-wise, a lovely tribute to a wife!

1 0 Reply
Michael Peterson 04 September 2017

Thank you for your help

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Michael Peterson

Michael Peterson

Janesville, Wisconsin
Close
Error Success