(! ! ! !) Destiny Poem by Alice Cuenca

(! ! ! !) Destiny

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With fairy dust
of altered belief
I sprinkled some
powdery sugar
on a worn-out bee
trapped on my side
of the screened-window.


whose spirit is entwined
with your destiny?

My flesh quivers...
Drawn towards the edge
of absolute certainty


In the subterranean depth,
the buzzing sound
grows dimmer.
Death! wielding
over life

A transient passage
into a place
where silence
is gone...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 27 March 2010

in the subterranean depth, the buzzing sound grows dimmer. Death! wielding over life......................wonderful write yet ingenious by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Marieta Maglas 06 November 2009

nice symbolistic poem, deep ideas well embedded, lovely to read

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Ying Escalona 14 September 2009

very nice, and where was its nectar, it must have gone sweeter after the additional sugar :) anyway, the fate we traced...must be destiny.

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