Ali Adamson


Destination - Poem by Ali Adamson

He is there...
No way to approach
for senses or mind
No way I have
in my dreams
How can I reach,
where He is!


Comments about Destination by Ali Adamson

  • Freshman - 781 Points V P Mahur (3/29/2014 4:50:00 AM)

    Dear Poet,
    Very shortbut like a shrp bullet.
    Thanks!
    Please reply. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (3/10/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Simple but very deep inside.The urge for finding out dear one is expressed with brevity of expression.A cute poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,732 Points Valsa George (2/3/2014 2:08:00 AM)

    If you earnestly desire, no need of wondering how to approach Him! He will come to you! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,467 Points Brian Johnston (1/18/2014 12:05:00 PM)

    A nice poem of longing for connection. I'm always looking for new perspectives when I find feelings like this bothering me. One perspective that helps me emotionally sometimes, is the answer of my poem An Apology to a similar feeling. The poem's answer is the realization that looking for God is the wrong question. The right answer is the revelation that God is everywhere already. We are like fish in the water who lack the clarity of vision to understand the the water is their constant support and source of life. There is no center to get to, no destination to reach, God is simply everywhere, the center is infinite! God is the water of our existence. In my humble opinion of course. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,151 Points Sallam Yassin (1/13/2014 12:32:00 AM)

    desire for almighty i see
    and needy heart
    To His love.....nice piece (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,545 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/6/2014 11:48:00 PM)

    thought provoking and nice.. haiku...
    love it.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/6/2014 8:21:00 AM)

    He is there is true. But no one knows where He is. How can one reach without knowing? Nice little poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,201 Points Shahzia Batool (1/5/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    We human beings are subject to moods and some inner phases, and this your thought captures such dark moment, by a li'l effort one can have a self-teaching for not thinking like this...the ways to approach are not wanting at all...! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, January 3, 2014


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