Dessert Flower Poem by Angel A. Lockwood

Dessert Flower

Rating: 4.0


Dessert Flower
Blooming organically in the darkest hour
As a Night Cactus
Such a beautiful flower
Unusal to some
Yet have undisputed power
Your energy flows
All around, just
As a Sun shower
Standing strong in the
Heat of presssure
Which attributes to your allure
Dessert flower
May I assume
You are aware of your value
You express liberty and
Virtue defines you
Perhaps you don't mind
That I applaud you
Organic flower
By far
You are exoctic
Also a super star

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 November 2019

i like lots of desserts: pie, cake, ice cream. i think you mean " desert" . i THINK. " Unusal to some: UNUSUAL. :) attributes? i think you mean some similar-sounding verb. " contributes" might work. " exoctic" ....exotic favorite lines: " May I assume You are aware of your value You express liberty and Virtue defines you" bri :)

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