Desire Poem by asma bahrainwala

Asma, there's nothing stagnant about your poetry... I'd say it flows quite nicely. Great write! ! Brian

I greatly enjoyed this one. Such a wonderful expression of your feelings. So simple and direct. I can relate to these words so very much. Great job!

gr8 poem asma.I liked it very much. yours, Nida

Lovely poemo Asma. Take care Roger

Very good! I like the brick by brick! ! ! ! Good work! SusanB

Shared ur desire. Appreciable emotion for mankind.

.....fine composition.............10

I'm not sure about the title of this piece. It seems to me that confined or restricted may have been a more appropriate title for this. It really wasn't a very unique message. I don't think you can put a word like desire in a title and expect the reader to be impressed after they read such a writing as this. It was, in my view, average. GW62

A wonderful poem rooted in modern realities. Thanks for shaing. K V Venkataramana

what an imagination; Great