Desert Metaphor Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Desert Metaphor

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'Just as desolate, and more isolated
This desert life has borne
As the scorching sun and still winds
That stirred the lonely skies and heart

And this emptiness
This vast expanse that always stayed with me
And never gets away
For it keeps spreading it's strife
Just like a remembrance
That even if I
Hide in the shadows of an old tree
Under the quiet stillness of a smile
Still the mystery remains
And the continued solitary life
That both me and the desert embrace

And I have become like the others
A nobody... just a part of a whistling winds
Into the immense space
Of heedless path of oblivion.'

Thursday, June 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 18 October 2016

Thank you Ms. Bharati Nayak for a very wonderful comment.

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Bharati Nayak 05 October 2016

The quiet beauty, the solitude, the vast expanse, the strife and the whistling wind of a desert have a meaningful presence in your life.To quote some Beautiful lines- - - - ; And this emptiness This vast expanse that always stayed with me - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - And I have become like the others A nobody... just a part of a whistling winds Into the immense space Of heedless path of oblivion.' A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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