Desert Blooms Poem by Martin O'Neill

Desert Blooms

Rating: 4.8


A dark seed,
Floating, it seems
On a hot desert wind
Silent.
Falling to the ground
There to bloom
In searing yellow
Shot through with carmine
And veins of a darker hue.
Beauty in the midst
Of austerity.
The observer is taken
By the spectacle
And smiles.
'Zero, this is Tango Three Zero,
Target destroyed. Over.'
'Roger, Tango Three Zero,
Return to base. Out.'
' Roger, ETA one hour. Out.'
Smoke follows the blooms.
Letters to families
Will follow the smoke.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Raubenheimer 11 February 2012

I should have been prepared by that word searing. The observer taken by the spectacle, thinking I was reading about a desert flower... was me.

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Jacqui Thewless 13 July 2009

Strong, stealthy poem.

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Paul Hansford 27 January 2009

A good surprise here, and all the more effective. The notion of beauty in an explosion, when seen impersonally, is very striking. Similar feel to 5.58.

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Fiona Davidson 21 January 2009

Excellent write Martin of those few seconds after launch...very descriptive...thank you...Fi

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Gargi Mandal-Mukherjee 16 January 2009

Brilliant...works up to a crescendo and then the simple anticlimactic assertion...bound to startle and shock.

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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