! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Desecration- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Desecration- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.6


Silver streaks at dawn
On sacred Yamuna, crammed
With polythene bags.


Yamuna- a sacred river of India

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 27 July 2009

..... and the dawn wondered at the pollution of the present humanity; sans Values! ! !

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 July 2009

I see the same phenomenon in Pakistan.This is happening to all rivers and streams passing through the cities. They are crammed with garbage and polythene bags and water seems like sludge. There is a moan, a groan behind the silent beauty of this haiku........10/10. Regards Naseer

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the sun would perhaps wonder whether yamuna has changed color...a very good 3 liner

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Indira Renganathan 21 July 2009

Thought provoking truth in simple three lines...excellent10+++++++++

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