Depression Poem by Scarlet .....

Depression

Rating: 3.1


dissolve the life from within me
you crawl inside of my mind
you want everything
you took the little i had left
you left me with nothing
you left me feeling empty
feeling used
and abused
you left me worse off then when you found me
and the worse part is
i know you will never be gone
for you are just hidden in my mind
wait for a perfect time to attack
to take all i will have worked to gain back
i hear you in the back of my mind
whenever i am stressed or angry
i feel you grow
when is it i will finally lose control
and you will rob me of it
when...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 30 March 2018

I can understand your pain..... I am also struggling to it..... Don't feel lonely.... Almighty is always there... Read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me.... Keep courage.. I rated it 10 +++ Naila

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Nia Schexnider 21 April 2014

Decide to be happy, decide that you will smile today, even if it's fake. It took me years to get over my depression. Live your life like it is your life, don't let the people who abuse you have control over your emotions. It feeds them, they enjoy eating your power and strength and keeping you down. very good poem. Thanks for sharing.

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fallen beauty 27 June 2007

Depression...a very powerful emotion..well state of mind..i guess...You can capture any emotion in poetry...Excellent job

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broken soul 16 June 2007

depression.. very sad piece.. but when we feel depressed.. we dont even know, what to hold on to.. so that we'll survive.. i can feel your pain.. depression really makes us insane..

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Barry Van Allen 06 June 2007

U.U., I do not like that subject much, but, you certainly did capture it! B.V.A.

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