* Departure~ Poem by Eyan Desir

When clouds came with distress The taste of my lips Shined the way to the path I Dried her tears and made her smile. ................................................................ Eyan, Very beautiful, very lovely, - the good fellow..10... Tsira

Eyan, honest feelings outspoken through magical words whether through a beautiful songs or poems, it is life in us manifesting itself in different forms, keep it up! 10++++

''She was the queen that sat Upon the throne of my heart No other beauty could Break our branches apart.''ok, these lines are very sweet... the piece is absolutely nice, ....the flow is nice..of course it is a nice expression.. ian my dear, no departure or no goodbyes for good relationship...

oh that is a really good poem! ! I really liked the flow of it, and i thought it was brilliantly written! ! ! ! ! (10)

'Love like ours shouldn't die It falls like rain and kisses the ground'... very good expression...emotionally romantic

‘…All that remains are/Pictures in the frame. I’d not say it as a sad poem…still some got a place in ‘Frame’ …many are there who stay unidentified and unrecognized… they’re too great….actually mindset is what important Finally God’s Intelligence actually programs our shares…why lament about…? Nice poem Sir 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Sad poem with rich feel and its words are true. Moving write.

nice rhythm. sad poem.: (. don't let women smash your heart. good poem

Really nice.... very inspiring...thoughts of pure friendship, of pure love...a commitment this is really a great poet...sweet and romantic..touching... Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia

Really nice.... very inspiring...thoughts of pure friendship, of pure love...a commitment this is really a great poet...sweet and romantic..touching... Thanks for sharing.... 10+++ Maia