Tiku akp


Departure


In the prime of our times
You left citing an obscure reason
Leaving the bird of mistrust
Shuffling its wings in the prison
Of my heart; where once your
Tear tainted face got engraved
In a page of my guiltless life
Promises broken were saved.

Who do you think is yours?
Your heart is full with ego and vain
Love died in the alter of wealth
When I bled and cried in pain.

A simple heart has been drawn
Into the sheer caprice of a beauty
Unaware of the tormenting sequel
For worshipping a false deity

I could have nourished new dreams
To lift me from inside the agonizing abyss; .
Believe me; no one would ever care for you
And would say ‘She is just an ordinary lass.’

Submitted: Monday, August 08, 2011
Edited: Monday, August 08, 2011

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  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (3/20/2012 9:30:00 AM)

    A simple heart has been drawn
    Into the sheer caprice of a beauty
    Unaware of the tormenting sequel
    For worshipping a false deity...these lines touched my heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (2/13/2012 4:12:00 AM)

    words of depths speak......echo of a male heart deeply dented by a beloved....
    It touched my heart. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,239 Points Kee Thampi (11/27/2011 9:05:00 AM)

    I could have nourished new dreams
    To lift me from inside the agonizing abyss; .
    Believe me; no one would ever care for you
    And would say ‘

    the dream may makes a new temper (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mary Lolly Florence Occenola (8/31/2011 2:27:00 AM)

    Leaving the bird of mistrust
    Shuffling its wings in the prison
    Of my heart; where once your
    Tear tainted face got engraved

    i felt this poem so much that it brought tears to my eyes.10+. thanks for sharing. keep them coming :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/13/2011 10:35:00 PM)

    In a page of my guiltless life
    Promises broken were saved.

    very touching lines.Phenomenal.Very poignant write. (Report) Reply

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