Departure Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Departure
It’s time to say bye
To all my ally
On whom I always rely
Even in time of wry
They make me feel high
This month of July
My heart feels dry
Along with wet eye
Which I can’t deny
It maybe my silent reply
To their warmth supply
Which I can’t even buy
With millions of pie
I will never find a tie
Even to their simply hi
It’s not a lie
Nor it’s a sly
It’s a true imply
Of my hearts cry
To trust hire any spy
Now its time to fly
Into new land of sky
But they will stay by
Even after this goodbye
In my heart until I die
nice to read kranthi............ you are writing immensely and profoundly...... also when time permits read my In Poem Hunter..........a tribute.......
AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like how it's almost all a big rhyme, life is some times hard but if it were easy we wouldn't be as strong. really amazing poem! ! !
Nice poem with good rhyme. Keep up the good work, Kranthi.
Sad poem…rhymed nicely …sorrows are and will be there...and thro’ it poets’ wreath poems… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Now its time to fly Into new land of sky But they will stay by Even after this goodbye In my heart until I die ----- fantastic rhyme scheme...a great farewell...wish to borrow this someday! 10+++
Kranthi the effort to maintain the same rhyming flow with each line I'm afraid has detracted from the heart of the message. And usually I'm blown away by your work, but sorry this one didn't do it for me. But please message me when you post more work, I know that there will be more to come.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:28:23 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Departure! ! Going away from loved ones family and friends is really killing. Some of them you gonna after quite some time, and some of the friends you may not get a chance to see for a long long time as people move in search of better opportunities. Nice Write.