Queeny Gona

Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

Departure - Poem by Queeny Gona

Past moments are sweet,
but future without you is bitter.
Jokes, sorrows, happiness shared are splendid!
The shelter i had under the tree of your love is never to be forgotten.
These are the moments:
when eyes start speaking rather than lips;
even my pen fails to pen.

Comments about Departure by Queeny Gona

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (11/4/2009 4:49:00 AM)

    Its a nice poem
    but can you change the last line....
    good write anyway (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 116 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (10/30/2009 5:22:00 AM)

    I am begining to be convinced to write a poem without applying any pattern just like some poems of Walt Whitman because I think I can express them poetically. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (9/18/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    Very brief expression of inner love and affection. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (8/12/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    a highly emotional poem
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 177 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (6/10/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    The last two lines show, how much a matured poet u are now.......Wonderful expression. Eloquent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/10/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    Loss of words says most. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 10, 2009

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