Departed Poem by Vivek Haldar
Departed
I could not meet the one who departed,
The words in my heart could not be spilled over,
The moonlight could not enlighten my soul
and the Moon moved miles away from me
A storm arose in my heart,
and the words reached their silent death,
Clouds were everywhere to be seen,
Yet there was no rain to shower my seething spirit.
This poem is excellent though its theme is sad, , good depiction with nice words, , , And I enjoy this read! ! ! Top marks
Powerfull and Deeply sentimented... everyone has a moment of darkness..
I can see it all happening, i love the imagery, i love how u bring forth the message.... *HEARTFELT*
A storm arose in my heart, and the words reached their silent death. I loved that particulat line. It really spoke to me.
“Clouds were everywhere to be seen, Yet there was no rain to shower my seething spirit. ” Good one! I like it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Hello Vivek Haldar, You poem is beautiful-thank you for sharing 'Departed' with me.