Delight Poem by Sandra Feldman

Delight

Rating: 4.9


As I stroll among the daisies,
Visions clear of you appear,
And my heart starts to go crazy,
And all sadness disappears.

Love and roses, salt and sea,
Bring you close, so close to me,
Heaven titillates, hearts vacillate,
But you're all that I can see.

Let the World continue crazy,
Let our lives be what they'll be,
I won't see the World as hazy,
If your sun shines down on me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2013

Wow! What a delight to read your 'Delight'! Certainly another 10/10 stuff! Anybody who knows love, wants love, feels love and loves love, will feel that your poem has made his/her day! Three perfect stanzas, each full! This is certainly a good piece of poetry. Loved the comments of Valerie Dohren and Roseann Shawiak and agree to both.

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Valerie Dohren 24 September 2013

Full of delight Sandra - made me feel much better.

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Roseann Shawiak 23 September 2013

Love the melody I hear when reading this poem. It's sounds like hopeful love - beautiful to behold.

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