Delicate Strength Poem by Savita Tyagi

Delicate Strength

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A vine wrapped around a thorny bush
Battles harsh wind and scorching sun
Heart of vine bleeds with leaves pierced
Still it grows and grows till thorns
Can't reach the new growth any more
Delicate strength of growing vine
A moving power in Nature's design
Excels the bushes of thorn benign.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hope overgrows here to surpass all hurdles in life.A sound poem that attracted me.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 June 2014

No only an amazing observation but a beautiful description as well. The example of vine and thorn is observed in human life many times.

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Amitava Sur 22 June 2014

The whole bush of thorn is still looking fine by those beautiful vines who took all the troubles to bloom in the odds.

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Ramesh Rai 22 June 2014

A thought provoking write. Delicate strength is needed.

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Neela Nath Das 21 June 2014

This is the natural power of a mind too.A beautiful thought Savitaji.Thanks for enriching us.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 June 2014

A moving power in Nature's design Excels the bushes of thorn benign. Essence of the poem is nicely brought out. The support/survival is more important than the uncofort caused by the thorns. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 14 June 2014

simple idea, great observ and detail descript make this poem so perfect and meaningful awesome work

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