Deja Vu Poem by Vijay Sai R

Deja Vu



Astonishing architecture
Magnificent carving
Towering idols
Temple car
Intricately decorated
Local folks
Celebrating fete
Gathering in numbers
An occasion
Not to be forgotten
So true
It turned out to be
As the earth crumbled
Shivering dangerously
Lasting seconds
More than everyone expected
Just when it appeared
The end of life
Is not so far
Everything stopped
And all became normal
So real it meant to me
Hard to believe
Not more than a dream!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roderick Gering 29 June 2013

very nice pen love the imagery

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Ellen Mendez 09 July 2013

Really good... Amazing....... i salute you sir...

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 July 2013

Very well said and ecstatic write Sir

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Walterrean Salley 18 July 2013

Thankfully it was just a dream, and not an actual occurrence. And so, everyone and everything was spared. A good poem.

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Kensley Charlemagne 23 July 2013

I don't think that the writer was dreaming at all.

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Lee Mack 19 May 2014

done? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Eli Spivakovsky 30 September 2013

The Earth crumbled/shivering dangerously - a vivid and beautiful line for a dream-like poem. Well done! !

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 10 September 2013

Great poem and well written. Not more than a dream! Loved it.

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Inwalked Bud 08 September 2013

Great poem! It is only a dream......Or is it? If humanity doesn't wake up soon, this dream could very easily become a reality!

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Wow. Beautiful poem..I thought it was real till the end..But dream looked so real, the way you portrayed...

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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