Deflowered Idea... Poem by Luana Del Lobo

Deflowered Idea...

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I spent all morning sensing an idea
It was shy at first
Begging to be left in peace

I wandered I penetrated
Into the profound ocean
I oscillated I chose my rhythm

I touched I had no fears
I deflowered this idea
Slowly
It was watching me...

It was like white velvet
Sweet cake
A virgin...

Now it moves
As I want
As I flow
As I breathe
As I am...

Sunday, June 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: virginity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 02 August 2014

Deflowering the idea like a lotus blooms On mind its beauty and music looms.

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Chuy Amante 02 August 2014

Hermosisimo! No son ideas de ningun lobo! increible!

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