Deepest Deepness Poem by Pure Remedy

Deepest Deepness

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In these past 2 months we held deepness
Deepness that held weakness
Weakness that shared secrets
Secrets that poured out the deepest
The deepest fear we share like lost or losing, past content or even adultry
But we both felt those burns before
So this time may My Love feel like immortality
That even yet im mortal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gutter Box 13 November 2008

Very good poem...well explained maybe if u have a cahnce you could look at some of mine. Thanks

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Fiona Davidson 03 November 2008

Love this poem...says it all...thank you...

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