Deeper Poem by Sandra Feldman

Deeper

Rating: 5.0


A Love that is:
Deeper than the deepest Sea,
Deeper than all Love can be,
Deeper than the mystery,
That has bonded you to me.

For there is no deeper love,
Than a love that cannot be,
Yet endures the depth of Time,
With deepest melancholy.

And so, deeply I can see,
What this love has done for me,
I have travelled into space,
In a state of utter grace.

Deeper than Life's mystery,
Deeper than the sky, the sea,
Deeper than all ecstasy,
Love is Immortality.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Pendleton 22 February 2013

the second stanza are words I completely relate with. not a day goes by. barely an hour it seems. love stinks!

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Kelly Seale 01 September 2012

Beautiful stated, beautifully penned! Great Write Sandra.; -0 -Kelly.

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Valerie Dohren 01 September 2012

Beautiful poem, very well written.

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Pablo Percussion 31 August 2012

there is no deeper love than a love that cannot be....great line.....I lived it in my life as true.... thanks, JR

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Ency Bearis 31 August 2012

Profound poem and to true - love is immortal. Great poem, nicely written.

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