Deep Within Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Deep Within

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You are deep within me as spirit
I move all over with strength in feet
It makes me feel elated
As everything seems to be well related

Every night I await your arrival
As day remain with performance to be called dismal
You invade secretly and make me unstable
I think of whole day about you and face the trouble

I shut all memory doors
But I am very poor lover
Can not resist your powerful invasion
As you come with all power before vision

I wish the day to end soon
The sun does not trouble me in noon
But you make me sweat in evening
As it is unbearable and saddening

I finish everything in time to have glimpse
In the dream and talk with face to face
I do not from which angle you look good
But you are certainly nourishment and food

You are well placed and bound to rule
That is place for you to occupy as full
I look at you and enjoy as simple fool
May be all lovers have same fate as rule

I fear nothing except your presence
That too in dream when I sleep at once
You come and talk in queen's style
I close the eyes and face changes lines to smile

Of course I live under shadow
That reflects how may be the shape of tomorrow!
I know for sure that you will certainly allow
As I may remain inactive and lye low

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priya Arora 07 December 2012

Hat off to you Sir, for your wonderful words...' Shut all memory doors But I am very poor lover Can not resist your powerful invasion As you come with all power before vision ' Beyond any praise...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2012

Well done Ging Alburo4 minutes ago Excellent nice structure check mine tooo Comment +1 Very nice!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2012

Missy Lionstead13 minutes ago Very nice indeed Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2012

Brandi Howes 13 minutes ago nice wording

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2012

You are deep within me as spirit I move all over with strength in feet It makes me feel elated As everything seems to be well related

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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