Deep Pain Poem by Rini Shibu

Deep Pain

Rating: 5.0


Some hurts that go deep
Deep inside stabs the heart
The intense and endless pain
Suffocates and makes breathless
You wish to cry but couldn't
Mind starts storming
And no one around to share
Sleepless and restless nights
Left alone with the thoughts
To sink into deep depression
It's the time you kneel down
Yearn for comfort and strength

Sunday, July 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hurt,pain,prayers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 24 July 2017

Hi Rini, Yes, a stab in the heart-most of us have felt it some time or other. Emotions expressed quite assertively. With limited number of words, you have been able to create an ocean of feelings. Good write. A 100+++

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Rini Shibu 25 July 2017

Thank you so much.. Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2017

Some hurts go deep inside heart and gives endless pain. You have so nicely and touchingly inscribed here. Marvelous poem on hurt and pain. Thanks for sharing....10

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Robert Murray Smith 30 April 2018

Rini, this poem drives home pain in every heart. Well penned.+++10 Robert

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 December 2017

Painful details of a delicate soul is sharply depicted in your poem Rini ......10

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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017

Sleepless restless nights are the hardest moments of depression when Left alone with the thoughts Thanks for sharing Houda Boukassoula

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Rini Shibu 23 December 2017

Thanks Houda for reading and commenting

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Binayakumar Mohanty 01 November 2017

It is time you kneel down Earn for comfort andstrength. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Rini Shibu 01 November 2017

Thanks for your comments Binaya.. Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2017

Restless nights! ! Thanks for sharing.

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