Savio Vogt

Rookie (26th dec 1992. / India)

Deep Ends Of The Sea - Poem by Savio Vogt

The deep ends of the sea,
are like that of infinity,
if believed, it can be found, not by others, execpt by you and me.
don't worry about negative people and their talk,
just hear it near them, and release it when, away from them you walk.
for if you are affected by their poison, for your courage will be
lock 'ed'.
believe in yourself, even though you are mocked
you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea.


Comments about Deep Ends Of The Sea by Savio Vogt

  • Veteran Poet - 1,859 Points Joseph Harlacher (5/4/2015 11:39:00 PM)

    Savio. your name is close to savior there are so few of us at this end of the sea dont if when departed walk away step back and give the venting understanding. we as individuals can not help every one here. keep up for you have good dreams... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,522 Points Francis Lynch (1/20/2015 3:46:00 PM)

    A fine effort. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,315 Points Kim Barney (1/20/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, marred only by a few small typos or misspellings:
    line 3 should have EXCEPT instead of EXECPT
    last line, WILL instead of WIL
    Congratulations for having it selected Poem of the Day once again! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,498 Points Savita Tyagi (1/20/2015 8:51:00 AM)

    Very inspiring poem written beautifully. Brushing off the disdain and believing in your self go hand in hand. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,852 Points John Richter (1/20/2015 7:46:00 AM)

    Very nice.... The human condition is filled with so many things. Among them are the disdain that comes from other's who demean us - whose familiarity with us makes them feel as though they have the right to discourage, presuming us to be as little as they themselves. Even Jesus Christ noted that He would be ineffective in His own home town for all who were familiar with Him would presume Him as lesser than they themselves. To them He was but a carpenter's son and would never rise to anything more. Yet by spreading His wings kings became fearful that His reign would rob their own. This poet recognizes that disdain, that wretched familiarity, and reminds us that it should be left behind. Valid subject, valid poem. well written also... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (1/20/2015 2:28:00 AM)

    A brilliant poem with strongest message - believe in yourself, even though you are mocked you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. must be noted and put in thought welcome such beautiful poem and draw in mind the pictorial words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,439 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/20/2015 1:59:00 AM)

    Very inspiring poem, worth reading several times. Excellent imagery too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,531 Points Kenneth Maswabi (1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    lovely piece of poetry.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,531 Points Kenneth Maswabi (1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    lovely piece of poetry.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathryn Mahan (1/21/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Beautiful... thank you :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Simon Samuda (1/21/2014 7:44:00 AM)

    I like this poem, resonates very much with my circumstances. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Padmanabhan Ananth (1/21/2014 2:03:00 AM)

    Good one, Savio. Liked the rhymes and reasons. Keep it coming! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,332 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (1/21/2014 1:38:00 AM)

    Simply loved this poem, especially the last part, believe in yourself, even though you are mocked
    you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. Congrats, Savio! This poem does indeed deserve to be the poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Nicholle Gibson (1/20/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    nice ink, really enjoyed it, an it was comforting, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 646 Points Maya Hanson (1/20/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    I like this- good write and engaging. thank you!
    ~mye3 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,073 Points * Sunprincess * (1/20/2014 8:02:00 AM)

    .......a nice encouraging word from a friend... is sometimes all you need...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,990 Points Babatunde Aremu (1/20/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    A highly motivating poem, very optimistic and encouraging. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,508 Points Gajanan Mishra (1/20/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    You will conquer the deep ends of the sea. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/9/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    A nice short poem with a wise message. Very inspirational as Bonnie said. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (2/7/2009)

    A very inpirational write.....

    Bonnie (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, December 30, 2011


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