Deep Black Eyes Poem by Mon Fur

Deep Black Eyes

Rating: 4.0


I’m sorry I can’t say it above a whisper.
I start to feel faint as the world starts to shiver.
Those 3 little words make my throat run dry.
And your deep black eyes make me so shy...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 21 October 2011

short and beautiful, I enjoyed it. :)

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Vipins Puthooran 30 September 2011

Short poem but I like the way you created it...those three words may become us shy and we say them in heart by bowing our head down....

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