Deconstructing Inspired Poetic Lines? Poem by Terence George Craddock

Deconstructing Inspired Poetic Lines?

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poet wanted to share
beautiful thoughts
intriguing thoughts

sparkling images
distilled grapes
ferment bubbling wine

but poemhunter
sliced diced
first vision lines

destroying harmonies
deconstructing
inspired poetic lines


Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in February 2014 on the 27.2.2014.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The sliced poems were especially those that had the same first line as the title, 'A Date With Eternity' and 'It Does Not Matter If The Air Is Stale' which is probably an automated programed editing or lazy editor. Poems like 'Viewing Life Image Multiplicity' and 'Internalizing Personalities' which corrupt on posting is a problem I have occasionally had in the past, usually when I could not fix this by editing, as it constantly reverts to the corrupted form, I just posted on other sites or not at all.
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