Decisive Turn Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Decisive Turn

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Life never discourages
But helps to manage
To overcome the crisis
This is simple logic or thesis

She was once very much brave
Dreamed and craved
For better life and future
It is made sure too

Time tuned against
She was pushed aside first
Then taken off from lovely friend
Thus reaching dead end

"Is this what people call" she was amused
So many things it had refused
"No. no it is no myth" she was not afraid of death
Life must be on till last breath

"My garden may have colorful flowers" she was hopeful
Rainbow shall appear too to make her cheerful
It was hope against hope to stay alive
She was firm and strongly believed

Something must be proved
Lie may be short but positively moved
There is no alternate for spring or autumn
Monsoon may provide decisive turn

Saturday, July 12, 2014
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Life never discourages But helps to manage

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good Melissa Easler12 minutes ago Good use of similes

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This poem is very beautiful 6 hours ago by Rachel Maria to Decisive turn

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Why do you put so much comments for your own poem 6 hours ago by Rachel Maria to Decisive turn

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kes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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exquisite Haroon Chaudhry13 minutes ago work a bit more on the last line Comment +1

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Monsoon Robert Alicias13 minutes ago well done. Promising note Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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