Deceit Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Deceit



i give you my word neela
i'll set you free
to go back to the forest
home on the greenest tree.
the blue your eyes dream for
beyond this hole of doom
from a life you perforce endure
for comforts of a prisoner's room.
i give you my word neela
i can't take it anymore
my heart is set on setting you free
should have done it long before.
i'll love to see your aching wings soar up the tallest tree
your feathers to sing in glee wind's sweetest melody
when you glow in the sun bathe in the dewy rain
you'll forget in that morrow all of today's pain.
i give you my word neela
i'll set you free
to escape from this hole of doom
from this hell of misery.

i give you my word neela
for a small favor you must do
speak before i set you free
my lessons of a word or two.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
for neela, my lovebird.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 29 August 2013

when you glow in the sun bathe in the dewy rain you'll forget in that morrow all of today's pain. Truly a beautiful passage, poignant and soulful, although its lovely to have a pet, to have one that is trapped in a limited environment such as a bird is not a pet but a prison. Excellent love song for nature

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Valsa George 26 August 2013

Unfortunately love birds cannot survive in the open sky after being tamed at home for sometime! They will be hunted down by other predators! An enjoyable read! !

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Heather Wilkins 25 August 2013

lovely writing enjoyed very much the read

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 August 2013

beautiful poetry.reading again.

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