Kill or Be killed

Rookie (8/14/92 / Pittsburgh)

Death seems fun!


It's sad when death feels like a fun release,
It's sad when people stop trying to talk you out of it,
It's sad when you look around and all you see is misery,

Maybe I'm just sad!

A pathetics speck,
A self loathing dimwit,
Or maybe I'm just ungreatful,

But, either way it's sad.

Submitted: Wednesday, October 01, 2008
Edited: Saturday, October 04, 2008

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  • Rookie Beth Whittaker (1/9/2009 4:59:00 PM)

    well, if youre a pathetic self loathing dimwit then so am i. you're not alone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Norma Southwood (11/28/2008 11:51:00 PM)

    Sometimes life gets us down, but there is happiness too. Sounds like you are having a bad time, you are human and must expect it. I understand and empathise with your words. Take care. Sadness and despair is unfortunately part of being human. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (10/2/2008 4:56:00 AM)

    Yes it is sad, I am sad for you for a start....better to find some fun that won't break the hearts of all those who love you. And they are out there, although sometimes it feels like no one is. They are and death is no fun to those left to deal with the consequences. Good write, better out than in, smiling at you, Tai (Report) Reply

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