Death’s Relief Poem by Anita Atina

Death’s Relief



He lay there quietly waiting

Eyes fading with constant pain


Vitality sapped, into a black hole

Of pain radiating from a diseased hell hole


Crouched foetally

No position relieved the ache


No doctor, no medicine

Relieved his agony


Alone, beyond the reach

Of any belief


He waited with eyes open

For deaths relief!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Shah 04 April 2008

Terrific description of death in the most beutiful way.I hae also described in my poem 'I feel You Death'. Please go through it also.Lovely style and nice vocab.

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Abha Sharma 23 March 2008

so touching..you personified DEATH in front of the readers..

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Michael Pruchnicki 21 March 2008

fantastic doesn't adequately convey my reaction!

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