Death Room Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The reason why i keep reading your works is because you have all senses that i like, this one for example feel close to me, the way you deliver it, it's enchanting...It scoring a dark background, chill on nerves but the meaning so utterly spoken..Dave, this is good work and i enjoyed the flow very much, thanks to Eric for his Inspiration too....by the way dont you feel something following you back when you leave the room...ghost maybe hahahahaha i 'm joking: p _Keep writing more episode of your thought :) _Unwritten Soul

Dear Dave, the meaning s of your words are really so great also it can has a lot of symbolics meanings.The room of death can be the world where we live.Yes really somethimes we feel that we can't easlyy breath, we are imprisoned.We all looking after a peaceful place where we can be free happy.Well done dear Dave. By the way the only thing that i hope you don't mentioned it is suicide, this feeling never gives any pleasure it always be with a great doom and gloom.

A great poem inspired by another great poet...fantastic concept..melancholy, yet strangely sweet and soothing? ? This was an intriguing and touching write. -SG

no one can take away a man's true freedom... we are imprisoned by our bodies... much as they often imprison our bodies wrongfully... you cover this subject with a thoroughness, and with insight. very good poem. thank you!

I heard Bob Dylan singing 'Knocking on Heaven's Door, ' in my mind, while reading this. It forms questions, and that's what I like... Food for thought.

Great poem inspired by another great poet. loved it.

amazing poem man. :)

Very good poem Dave. Very moving too.

Powerful poem. With a beautiful flow to it. Great work.

accepting one's fate in such a situation is the only way to be free. there is no mystery in death only in life and that is the prison in which we live. nice write