Death Overcomes Poem by Cynthia Carpenter

Death Overcomes

Rating: 3.5


broken, beaten, left alone
through my eyes love has shone
death cascade all around
blood drips through to the ground
bound an gagged my heart died
all along i knew you lied
but i stayed despite the pain
what is it, you expected to gain
besides breaking my fragile heart
battered and bleeding it's torn apart
love me, hate me
why did you say we were meant to be
you broke my heart an now your gone
never again will i see the light of dawn
I'm buried, broken an dead
i guess love just filled my head
goodbye to all
darkness swallows me as i fall

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my ex
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

I've just read your poem- 'Death Overcomes'. It is sad and somber. I pray that you overcome your sad feelings and see the joy of life and living. 'These lines particularly made me sad: I'm buried, broken an dead i guess love just filled my head goodbye to all darkness swallows me as i fall'

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Cynthia Carpenter

Cynthia Carpenter

jacksonville, flordia
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