Sallie Howson


Death Of A Poem - Poem by Sallie Howson

Shot down in its prime.
Shot down
While making daisy chains in the park
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Comments about Death Of A Poem by Sallie Howson

  • Gold Star - 12,506 Points Kelly Kurt (4/8/2015 12:48:00 AM)

    A wonderfully touching poem, Sallie. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Awa Bah (4/8/2014 5:18:00 PM)

    A very beautiful imagery (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,067 Points Nika Mcguin (4/8/2014 12:59:00 PM)

    Shot down in its prime.
    Lying dead now
    On a cold white slab.
    Experts dissecting its liver and heart,
    Picking over interesting bits.
    Sew it back together
    Please.
    Don’t leave it in the fridge.
    Give it a decent burial,
    Leave it some dignity
    And let me weep for it,
    Shot down in its prime.

    Simply beautiful and heartbreaking. The part I pasted above really reigns in all of the emotion, pity and sadness, felt at the death of a poem. And let me weep for it for me that was the punch line!

    ~Nika (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,009 Points Savita Tyagi (4/8/2013 2:35:00 PM)

    Shot down in its prime, young and delicate just like those New town kids.Couldn't help thinking of them while reading this soul touching poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 657 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/8/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    A great poem bewitching in its thought and beauty.! Leave it some dignity / And let me weep for it, / Shot down in its prime.- are lovely lines that capture the heart, Sallie! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (4/8/2013 9:01:00 AM)

    Great write. Keep the ink flowing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (4/8/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    Sallie hawson you are the first and perhaps the last poet to have correctly aptly and brilliantly defined a poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (4/8/2012 7:44:00 PM)

    Very nice poem, beautiful imagery (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/16/2008 4:56:00 AM)

    Another good one I picked and mesmerized. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (9/22/2008 2:15:00 AM)

    death of a poem...alright...but words resurrect strong here...a poem emotional built on good metaphor base...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (7/19/2008 7:53:00 AM)

    heartwrenching, nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stug Jordan (5/9/2007 5:17:00 PM)

    This is VERY good. Had to start it again straight away I enjoyed it so much. S x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madly In Love (5/9/2007 4:44:00 PM)

    Amazing poem Sallie i really enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply










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