Marvin Brato Sr

Rookie - 445 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

' Death' (Loop Poem) - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Procreation is a gift
gift shared in marriage

Marriage is sacred
sacred defines life

Life is quite monumental
monumental as in special

Special thing being alive
alive to take adventure

Adventure is exploration
exploration for survival

Survival declares the fittest
fittest among others is finite

Finite is human life's span
span of living is unpredictable

Unpredictable is our existence
existence that soon shall vanish

Vanish shall become all of us
us as human succumbs to death


Comments about ' Death' (Loop Poem) by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Freshman - 753 Points Mike Barrett (12/28/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    I agree with Valerie's comment. Good write! (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 1 Points Doris Cornago (12/27/2013 9:32:00 PM)

    I like the structure of this poem best. I like your imagery, although I prefer they would be more brightly colored. You are so somber for one so young. Why is it? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,011 Points Valerie Dohren (7/24/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    Loop poems are new to me - very good write. (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Monday, July 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, July 23, 2012


[Hata Bildir]