Death Is Slow Motion Poem by ashley roberts

Death Is Slow Motion

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Death is slow motion

Like a broken boat

At the bottom of the ocean

Rusting away day after day

No part of life

Death takes life away

Its easy to say i dont care

Its easy to grin while someone else is there

Its easy to act like your all big and hard

But you cant let the sadness go

You cant open your heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 25 November 2008

Its poems like these that make me glad i wandered onto the poetic scene when i did. Great poem! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Beccy Mawson 23 April 2008

wow great poem.... i no just how u feel... always hidin feelings when u dont need to but dont feel u hav any other choice..... once again great poem... keep it up Beccy x

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