Death Fear It Not Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Death Fear It Not

Rating: 4.3


As thine wake up to the winter misty morning,
With no sunlight,
Bright colorful flowers or the chirping birds singing their song,
The Feeling of death lurks within thy.

Close to thee, Thy see nothing,
Just fog and the gloomy atmosphere sing,
A close friend of old age comes and pays a visit to your fable feelings,
Although I tell thee, There is no need to be afraid.

Death makes angel's of us all,
And leads us a path of a new crawl,
Indifferent forms, Yes I tell thee,
But that's how nature works and that's how it wants to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Res John Burman 22 October 2009

Hi Eddie. Thanks for the invite. I enjoyed this!

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Ahmed Abdalla 01 November 2009

good lines, well expressed. i like it

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 November 2009

death makes angels of us all...a very different thought...10

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Maria Shipka 01 November 2009

yes! 'The death makes angels of us'...or to the Angels hidden inside us grows the wings...and we can fly! Good idea is hidden in your poem Eddy!

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Winnie Koh 01 November 2009

thx for inviting me....^^

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Khaldun Atum 24 November 2010

Expression is very clear and well written. Good work

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C N Prem Kumar 21 November 2010

Poem with clarity and clear feelings. Nice work.

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Fadwa Gmiden 19 November 2010

yeah death is a right to people everyone has the right to die the real question is did you benefit your life as much as you can during you life i love it it makes death easy witch is to me ;)

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Veronica Gonya 17 November 2010

you make it sound so easy, but i think what we all scared of is the way to die but not death itself. this is more than a poem, i wud say it's a debate my dear friend. do we all become angels? for the good or bad? mh makes you wonder? no one wants to tempt fate.

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Joseph Poewhit 01 February 2010

Words to think about.

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