Death (English Project Comment Please) Poem by Sam Hussin

Death (English Project Comment Please)



The loss of a loved one is the stage of pain and remembrance of once life.

An old friend and a new life.
When my heart aches so much; when I know something is making it ache so much; what is it that I am supposed to do to relief all the ache I’m feeling.

Death.

When I know my friend, my brother and a person who has changed my life for the better is long gone to heaven and here I am in hell.

Death.

Here I am in hell trying get through the day without him, how is it that my savor and guidance is gone.

Death.

We all had something to remember him by, I can go on days talking about how he didn’t stop smiling and making us smile with him. And great memories we shared.

Death.

He left something in me I haven’t found yet, he was only so young and now his memories so old, he’s a memory in our hearts. He is gone; yet we have only begun.

So here it is, I am staring at the sky and I know that he also looking down on me, he’s saying something, but he’s so far away, he presents a sad and confused face.

Death.

And I too use that confused face and wonder to myself if he’s disappointed in me… I’m I doing wrong in my life, or is he just sad that he left me to only a life of regret and sorrow.

Death.

He was my friend and brother; a sign to a right path and a new path; a change and a new start.

Life.


I now live my life only how he would have wanted me to live it. I relief the ache day by day, my smile wider, my head pointed to the sky only to remember my friend Mitchell tanner and what great life he lived.

Life.

Death happens, death happened, but that doesn’t matter because my life is HAPPENING.

Alive.

RIP M.T.

english project. my theme is at the top, so if anyone would please comment and tell me how it is would be great, thanks very much.

Sam M.

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