Death Poem by Melody Morningstar

Death

Rating: 2.8


It's a sudden blow
aimed at ur heart
it hurts but it doesnt kill ya
sometimes you wish it would

it stings like a wasp
in ur heart and ur throat
you wanna cry
but you can't

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steve Fulk 28 September 2005

Point well taken. Straight and believable. I really like the simplicity of this short one. Nice Melody....................

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