Death Poem by Sindal Benson

Death

Rating: 5.0


TEARS DROPPING,
DROPPING FOREVER
SMILES FROWNING,
FROWNING FOR AGES
HEARTS BREAKING,
BREAKING OVER A BROKEN LOVE
HOPE DIEING,
DIEING EVEN AFTER DEATH
KINDNESS VANISHING,
VANISHING FROM EXSITANCE
FRIENDS RUNNING,
RUNNING TO HIDE
LOVE FAILING,
FAILING TO PREVAIL
HAPPINESS ENDING,
ENDING A LIFE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 07 April 2009

touching and full of sentiments, though the way you have written it means you were shouting....making the letters all in bold one....thanks!

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I agree.. it is deep. very.. continue writing.. As I telle my friend.. Read read Read Edit, Edit, Edit... Write Write Write! ! ! ! then edit!

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MuSiC HeaD 06 April 2009

deep.........................

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