Natasha Ligons

Rookie (6/8/90 / fresno california)

Death - Poem by Natasha Ligons

DEATH.
DEATH IS WHEN YOU LEAVE THIS WORLD,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU HAVE REACHED YOUR FINAL DESTINATION,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU SAY GOOD BYE TO YOUR LOVE ONES
DEATH IS WHEN YOUR MEMORIES ARE JUST GONE,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU ARE ALONE,
DEATH IS JUST A FINE WAY OF SAYING GOOD BYE,
DEATH IS ANOTHER WAY OF SAYING HI,
DEATH IS JUST A PART OF LIFE,
YOU COME INTO THIS WORLD DYING,
AND YOU GO OUT LIVING,
YOU COME INTO THIS WORLD ALONE,
AND YOU GO OUT WITH A CROWD,
DEATH IS JUST A SWEET PART OF LIFE,
DEATH IS JUST A SOMETHING OUT OF RIFE,


Comments about Death by Natasha Ligons

  • Rookie - 29 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/27/2009 9:36:00 PM)

    Some say death is the beginning of another life. You have written some thought provoking words about death. Greenwolfe is right last two lines are unnecessary, nice write otherwise.

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/11/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    There are some very good lines in here. Some are not so good. I'm not sure that
    you need the last two lines.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 5, 2009


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