! ...Death Poem by Seema Aarella

! ...Death

Rating: 5.0


Under the blanket of solitude
a long slumber
of undisturbed dreams!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

good image you create on the ultimate rest...well meaning selective words, Seema...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 December 2008

lines are good though the contens are arguable. this is a hiku like one. The hiku will have 5 syllabi in the I line,7 in the II line and 5 in the last line. this is for information

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Dr Kamran Haider 04 December 2008

You have made death loveable and beautiful... But soon I read this beautiful Haiku, Shakespeare spoke in my head in the doleful voice of Prince Hamlet... 'For in that sleep of death, what dreams may come? ' I won't mind if the dreams would be undisturbing... :)

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