Dead Churches, Dead Bodies, Dead Animals Poem by O Anna Niemus

Dead Churches, Dead Bodies, Dead Animals

Rating: 2.0


Morticians paint
the lips of corpses.

Enbalmers inject
mammal pieces made into
cold cuts with sodium nitrate
dyes.

and dead
churches paint
their exterior

while inside..
the words of Jesus
about peace
are ignored.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sage of Time 11 August 2008

oooooo thats awesome! ! !

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Callie Carroll 02 June 2008

The ideas intrigue me. I would rework stanzas 2 and 4. Same ideas (good ones) , different word choice? ? I hope you don't take offense. These are just the kind of comments I would welcome to help me improve my poems.

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