Dead But Alive Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Dead But Alive

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Dead but alive,
No more wish to live
Easy spending
And always offending

Abnormal behavior
No respect or honor
Only jokes and satires
But somewhere it misfires

Life is no life at all
Animal even responds to call
You are burden as human being
As fool is always called mighty king

Wealth is no problem
Health is bothered seldom
Family is rich and prosperous
Life goes on aimless and continuous

It is confined
Not at all defined
Eat and be merry
Carry the load as animals carry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 December 2013

Do we call this phase of life as evolution? Haven't we evolved from normal routine life of searching for food and shelter?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

Dead but alive, No more wish to live Easy spending And always offending

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Morose Mermaid 03 December 2013

Interesting title...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

much better Not Important9 minutes ago .

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

Jaye Wow, very deep poem. I can kinda relate to it. TFS!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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