Dazzling Drops Poem by Kaitey Cat

Dazzling Drops

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The drops,
of seltzer,
Yes, the ones on the top,
they glitter and shine,
like mini, liquid dimonds.

Why,
Does everything you touch,
or everything I see,
after you,
Shine like a million faucets of light?

The old pink notebook,
forgotten from first quarter,
holds a gleam,
and when you ask to see it,
I say no.

Your face is comical,
you look confused,
and after a second,
you take the book anyway.
It just had some doodles, maybe a heart, and some stars in an unknown galaxy.
You smile and hand it back,
victorious of your win.
I smile back, you're contagous.

Now the book,
Old and covered in doodles
Is special.
It shines with an inner light only I see.

Maybe.
I.
Am.
Crazy.

Maybe.
I.
Am.
Not.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
P W 03 January 2009

Kaitey, Kaitey, Kaitey. This was lovely and doodley

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