Dawn Poem by pablo picasso

Dawn

Rating: 4.0


The dawn that day rose
Just as the mist of the night
Subsided like a foam descending
To reveal clear water ahead
The Bees in the hive stirred about
To retrieve more honey
It was on that day that I stared into the
Mirror of luck.
Hours passed by just
As flies whizzed under a scorchy sun
The foam above the crystal water rose again
The mist of the dusk rose high above me
shattering the mirror to grits
I plunged down from a mountain
Into the depths of dreariness
It was then that I acknowledged
What I've been through
It was then that I screamed
'HEY, day! It was now that I crystallized
your power in the miror of my mind'
And thence I sat in the chair of dreariness
Waiting for the gleams of gold and silver
To shine on once more upon the mirror.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 12 May 2014

'HEY, day! It was now that I crystallized your power in the miror of my mind' Lovely lines of a nice poem.

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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Nice poem Mr Picasso

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Rajaram Ramachandran 22 September 2009

So nice is the dawn, I enjoyed the flow of words that made it remarkable.

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premji premji 13 June 2009

beautiful dawn.. welcome to poemhunter

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Fay Slimm 12 June 2009

I like the flow and metre of this poem and it is penned with maturity of thought too.... a very good first attempt and worth every one of the ten I am giving it...10 evey best wish for future writing from Fay...

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