Dawn Poem by David Blake

Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Somewhere in the darkness,
though I have tried I lost your
love. Growing colder, the
passion of the past can never
be undone. In the lonely
light of everything that can
now never be, I await your
return. Pretending not to see,
I bow my head knowing all is
lost. Lamenting the passage
of time, it is only in your memory
that I will ever be set free.

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Very beautiful poem

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Well David, this is a very beautifuly written - a piece of a real poetry :) I hope you'll see hope with every dawn.

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Theodora Onken 17 November 2007

Ah, David, i so identify with this one. Been in the same situation, and it is horrible. Love your poetry, as it is coming straight from your heart! Theo

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