Mark R Slaughter


Dawn - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

Dawn blushed – betrayed her waking sky
To gently break another morrow fine.
Night waned – the black receding – highland
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Comments about Dawn by Mark R Slaughter

  • Rookie - 59 Points Brian Jani (5/3/2014 3:02:00 AM)

    Nice choice of theme (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Fiona Schwartzinoff (1/19/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Beautiful! It sort of reminds me of my own poem Twilight Haiku. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Jennifer Gonzalez (12/23/2012 4:56:00 PM)

    what an addicting poem is seems to flow nicely
    I can see this poem being a huge hit (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sodoko Zavaki (9/15/2012 7:30:00 PM)

    love this poem =) nice job. Wow it's pretty long (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Halcyon Poemcrafter (7/5/2011 5:10:00 PM)

    Serene!

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  • Rookie - 36 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (11/7/2010 9:27:00 AM)

    Really a nice poem that expresses a beautiful thought regarding the dawn in a very impressive manner. Of course, the day break like a bride who opens her veil. You've present it in a very simple language but expression is great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mahina Aftab (11/7/2010 7:25:00 AM)

    hey...ummmmm...i read this poem again and again but i couldn't understand it......a little help please? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Sisirachandra Vaduge (10/19/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    'Dawn blushed; revealed her inner peace;
    She handed on another blissful day.
    Night ebbed, relenting to release of
    Warming blood that gives to her display'

    Nature, humanity, human feelings and mans reactions depicted blended upon philosopy and artistic talent.Please read mines too 'antidote' and ' giantsqurrel' somewht similar to your philosophy... dawn..please leave any comment welcome and best of 'blissfull wishes'' for your talents & posts...
    sisirachandra vaduge. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Estrella Resendez (4/10/2010 9:52:00 PM)

    nice job! ! ! that really inspires (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brandon Goll (4/1/2010 11:16:00 AM)

    Cool Poem keep making them! ! ! (Report) Reply








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