Daughters! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Daughters!

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Daughters are the beloved of parents
They are the proud of the parents.
With their splendid heart they win everyone.
This relationship is woven so beautifully in their heart.
When they get married and settle elsewhere,
Though this thread is invisible in grooms home,
Just take a deep dive into the daughters heart
You will find deep hidden love always for their parents.



Betiyaan! (Hindi)

Babul Ki pyaari hoothi hain betiyaan
Babul ki raunak hoti hain betiyaan
Maaykay ki garv hoti hain betiyaan
Her ek ko apne dil say jeet lethi hain betiyaan.
Dil say Banda hua hotha hai dor unka babul say
Woh dor Sasural mein dikhayee nahin detha hai
Agar dil ki gehrayee mein jhankhogey toh
rishta gehrayee ka dikhayee detha hai.



©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kavya . 07 December 2013

Well said n hw true.... hindi version i liked more...daughters r precious jewels of parents who always bestow their love upon them

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 December 2013

Nice poem in both versions. Daughters are darlings for their parents. Lovely poem. Thank you.

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 07 December 2013

Very nice poem...I liked your style of writing so much. If you don't mind please go through my new poems.I am waiting for your comments. Regards, Mallika.

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Valsa George 07 December 2013

So true, Geetha! I miss a daughter's love! Hope my would be daughters in law will once fill that gap! (I have two sons only)

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Suman Kumar Das 08 December 2013

So beautifully composed in both version...................a eternal truth............. loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2014

Both the poems are beautiful. Very impressive.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 17 September 2014

so true it is......Geetha......daughters have emotions and sentiments and they are really very supportive, kind and hospitable to their parents through good and bad phase of life

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Kee Thampi 21 December 2013

our old age- daughters always love their- own- parents they only treat us in old age..... give our heartful for them

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Kee Thampi 21 December 2013

our old age- daughters always love their- own- parents they only treat us in old age..... give our heartful for them

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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

that's the educated thought...rishta gehrayee ka dikhayee detha hai....good versions both! ! !

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