Dates Acrostic Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Dates Acrostic

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Dark brown dry fruit delicacy and delicious
Almond pitted and highly nutricious
Tasty Arabian chocolate hued treat
Eastern 'n' Persian sweetmeat
Soft insides, dessert of the desert, so sweet!

Islam encourages marital spouses and doesn't allow premarital fickle sweetheart dates
Thus the only dates allowed are the edible ones you see on rozedar's plates.
RAMAZAN MUBARAK GREETINGS
break fast with my acrostic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Khalid 05 July 2014

thnks fr the cmment and yor poem is good too actually it is a very good poem about the date.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : }

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Clint Kingham 05 July 2014

First, I thank you for commenting on my poem and giving me feedback, I love how you use the Ramadan theme in your poem and I wish you a Ramadan karim, keep up the good work.

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Sameer Ahsan 06 July 2014

wow! great piece of work simply superb and your style of co-relating dates is a great meaning. Hope holy ramadan is date free not dates free in the plate of rozedaars

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Saadat Tahir 06 July 2014

nice straight forward lines...stating a religious dictum drawing attention to the holy month of ramadan the word play injects a freshness into the iftar.. :) i remember as a student decades back we used it to similar advantage to tease our class fellows. nice liked

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Omar Eldamsheety 07 July 2014

nice poem... Ramadan Mubarak.

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Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 19 July 2014

MashaALLAH! Sweetness and serenity personified.

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Rafique Farooqi 11 July 2014

sweet poem, i loved this..............................................

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Nida Aslam 10 July 2014

All I can say is...delicious poem.. :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 July 2014

seems to be for ramadhaan Is it Iftaar party well done 19

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Linda A 09 July 2014

I love dates and I love this poem :)) Ramadan Mubarak :)

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