Darkness Poem by charlie bones
Darkness
All alone in the dark,
Looking down at my stress mark,
Alone in the darkness,
Even my shadows have died,
Overwhealmed by sadness,
All alone with no one standing by my side,
Darkness swallows up my soul,
creating such a huge hole,
Tearing my heart,
Into millions of parts,
Darkness covers me,
I wish i could just turn a key,
within a lock around a chain,
To try and lock away all of this pain,
tears fall from my eyes,
Surrounded by all of these lies,
The part about even shadows dying means so much, it's really quite impressive. Very powerful without being forceful. Cheers -M
Darkness! Even my shadows have died, swallows up my soul, creating such a huge hole, I really appreciate these verses.Well done.Go on! ! ! !
well this was also my first attempt at doing a rhyming poem too so i think it hasnt turned out to bad but thankyou for all of your kind words.
Outburst of the heart vividly painted in this well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your Beauty and Talent! There is always light at the end of tunnel and also there is a golden sunshine day waiting for you! 10+++ Thank you my dear Charlie for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
but i think this is great. the light will destroy the whole darkness in the universe. a nice penning well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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but i think this is great. the light will destroy the whole darkness in the universe. a nice penning well done.