Darkness Poem by lola hi l

Darkness

Rating: 4.6


the stars dissapear from the sky
and dissapear my desire to try
and my dreams have levelled in the darkness
wich im surrounded by
and my screems grow louder
then it involve in the black
absorb by the darkness
and no one hear it
cause all are in white
a shining light..
a shining light shows..
it's the darkness throw your pain in your face
left behind wounds will never be erase

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hribhu Dey 06 June 2011

Loved reading the piece....great dear!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 July 2009

Darkness isn't all is bad, through it we could have a peace of mind.Nice writes Lola.

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Luwi Habte 27 July 2009

Lola this is so nice and nice ideas as well love it Luwi

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Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

well expressed poem...meaningful...

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